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January 9, 2005

turns by itself

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 12:40 pm

 

chess men in boxes . . .

the cafe’s ceiling fan

turns by itself

 

 

Michael Dylan Welch full size, color photo & haiku “welch25chessN” 

from Open Window, haiku & photographs 

 

 

more Michael Dylan Welch from the premiere issue of

               Jason Sanford Brown’s new haiku e-journal roadrunner.

 

 

 

second trimester

a package arrives

with baby clothes

 








blue water

  blue sky

     the breakup

 

 

 
by dagosan:  



sleep-in Sunday: 

snowmelt 

finds the newspaper

 

                               [Jan. 9, 2005]

 

one-breath pundit




“tinyredcheck”  Since I moved to Schenectady in 1988, I’ve been surprised that so many lawyers,

who did not seem to be “public-service types,” sought County employment as they

reached middle age — especially in part-time positions (ostensibly 17.5-hour weeks),

which allowed them to keep their private practices.  Today’s Sunday Gazette offered

one explanation (“County alters fee-insurance benefit, B1, Jan. 9, 2005, $$):


“For decades, Schenectady County offered its employees and their

spouses a sweet deal: Free health insurance for life after just five years’

credit in the state retirement system.”

The insurance costs the County $6 million annually, which represents one-third of its

total health insurance costs, and comes to over $5400 per retiree.  And, because working

for any branch of local government (including public defender offices, or town justices)

counts as state retirement time, the retiree might have “served” Schenectady County for a

very brief stint before “earning” this (and other) benefits.  Under the new policy, you’ll have

to work 15 years to get free health insurance for yourself and your spouse.  It’s clear that

a lot of elected officials are receiving this particular benefit, but the Gazettee was not

able to obtain the numbers.   

 

crusade ship  A New York Times editorial today starts with “Tort reform,” the Bush

administration’s answer to the problem of high medical malpractice costs, makes sense from

only one aspect: the political. ”  It’s a good read.  Confused about the cost of tort reform?


January 8, 2005

dui cherry cordials

Filed under: Haiku or Senryu,lawyer news or ethics,Schenectady Synecdoche — David Giacalone @ 4:47 pm

cherriesSmG one-breath(alyzer) pundit We don’t often make national news here in the NYS Capital Region, but when we do, it often seems to involve various addictions, vices, and/or ditzy judges. One local criminal law story this week fits neatly in that rubric.

You see, Martha Hamlin of Averill Park, NY, is out on bail pending appeal of her one-year sentence for a DWI conviction (related to an accident in which her auto struck and killed a 17-year old boy). One condition of her bail is that she may not have any alcohol. She is checked six times a day, over the telephone, using a Sobrietor. As CapitalNews9 reported on Jan. 6th, “But at 8 a.m. on Dec. 26, her blood alcohol level checked in at .06.” Hamlin contends that her consumption was unintentional, because she ate a box of chocolate-covered cherries she had received as a Christmas present, which contained liquor. According to the Troy Record:

cherriesSm “After rising at 6 a.m. she consumed the entire box of cherries, along with several cups of flavored coffee, before the 8 a.m. reading, Hamlin said. By the time she spoke with [Probation Officer] Powell, her fiance had burned the package along with other Christmas trash, but a similar box notes chocolate liqueur as an ingredient, Hamlin says.”Apparently, still in the holiday spirit, Judge Anthony Carpinella chose to believe Hamlin, finding that the DA had not proven she had been drinking. As you might imagine, the District Attorney’s office disagrees [“to the point where you’re at .062, you’ve got to be eating a lot of chocolate.”], as does the victim’s mother [“Have you ever eaten that much chocolate and not thrown up? I mean, it’s ridiculous.”]. Hamlin’s victorious lawyer Charles J. Wilcox said: “I’m convinced that my client is telling the truth, and I think it’s unfortunate. But it’s perfectly human for someone to ingest candy.”

Local media engaged in some heavy investigative reporting on this issue: The Troy Record found out from the owner of a candy store that “that chocolate liqueurs can make up five percent of the candy’s weight, and that they are subject to the same regulation as beer or hard liquor. ‘The chocolate cherries are alcohol filled, and you have to be 21 to buy them. Some customers who have eaten many of these candies at a sitting tell her they feel the effects of alcohol, she said’.” More on point regarding the merits of the “cherry cordial defense,” John McLoughlin, the Falstaffian reporter for the local ABC affiliate, WTEN, decided to do his own testing:

“After buying three pounds of chocolate-covered cherries soaked in brandy, two WTEN employees agreed to eat nearly two pounds of the brandied cherries during a two hour period. “The women were then taken to the Albany Police Department’s Traffic Division where Officer William Wilson checked their sobriety. Both women registered zero readings for alcohol. “In Martha Hamlin’s case, she said she ate the candy for two hours that morning, the judge said two pounds of candy might equal four shot glasses of alcohol. Hamlin’s blood alcohol reading was .06, which is nearly three-quarters the legal limit for DWI.”

Personally, I’ve never liked cordial cherries very much. The last time I ate a boxful in one sitting, they gave me a stomach ache and a slightly dizzy feeling.

all night
under the cherry blossoms
nagging

………………………………… from Issa, translated by David G. Lanoue

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

butcherj Backyard Butchering Update: Last week, we explained that Schenectady, NY, major Brian U. Stratton wants to ban backyard butchering of livestock. Indeed, Corporation Counsel had noted that the ban would need to cover hunters in order not to be discriminatory (some citizens believe the ban is aimed at East Indian immigrants from British Guyana; see the NYT article on Schenectady’s Guyanese Strategy). Well, it looks like the deer-hunter lobby is too strong locally, as Mayor Stratton has announced that Butcher Bill to exempt game (Albany Times Union, Jan. 7, 2005). The public hearing on the proposal will be held Monday, Jan. 10, at City Hall.

growing old–
even the cherry blossoms
a bit annoying

he’s a mountain
cherry blossom-crazed
old man

a hot bath
a prayer
then cherry blossoms!

world of pain–
and the cherry blossoms
add to it!

…………………………………….. from Issa, translated by David G. Lanoue

frozen river —
snow hides
the elm’s reflection

…………………… by dagosan

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

January 7, 2005

been bashoed lately?

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 2:56 pm

A thoughtful friend gave me a copy of Classic Haiku: An Anthology of Poems by Basho and His Followers
by Basho Matsuo, translated and annotated by Asataro Miyamori (2002), for Christmas.  It arrived late, extending

my holiday even further.  

 

 Basho is considered to be one of the four greatest masters of Japanese haiku.  The book is meant for folks

(like me and maybe you) with virtually no knowledge of Japanese literature.  It has a transliteration of each

verse, along with many explanations, and often more than one translator’s version of a particular haiku.

 

ClassicBashoN The gift made me want to share the joy of Basho with you.  Here are a trio of haiku from Classic Haiku

translated by Asataro Miyamori:

 

 


What a bright moon!   I strolled

   Around the pond all night.

 

 

 







Alas! the firefly seen by daylight

Is nothing but a red-necked insect.

 

 

 

Well, let’s go snow-viewing

      Till we tumble over.

 


by dagosan:  



overnight

enough snow to make

slush

 

                     [Jan. 7, 2005]

 



   I’ve been using all my breath over at Crime & Ferderalism the past few  snow pile
days while Fedster Cernovich hangs out at bar review class.  See what’s been on

my mind about the fear of billable hours (chronomentrophobia) and loser pays.

And, check out Mike’s take on Congress, torture and Gonzalez (with good

comments).

January 6, 2005

warming my neck (after sticking it out)

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 11:59 am









winter hike

the baby’s breath

warms my neck

 

my tongue

explores a worn tooth

the snowy hills

 

 






dry heat

a hawk corkscrews

the sky

 

 


“winter hike” & “my tongue” from the haiku chapbook piano practice       piano stool

(Bottle Rocket Press, 2004)

“dry heat” from  from Walking the Same Path; Heron’s Nest VI:4

 

 

 


by dagosan:  



he’s stripping

the bed sheets

she shovels the walk

                                [Jan. 6, 2005]

 

 

 




 
Adirondack chair

upholstered

with snow

 

                 [Jan. 6, 2005, 

                         inspired by Ann Althouse]

 

one-breath pundit



  While others do his work, RiskProf Martin Grace is in Philadelphia interviewing
economists.  He did, however, leave behind a thought-provoking post on the

effects of taxing HMOs to subsidize med-mal preimums and another on

Credit (Insurance) Score, Race and Risk.  Who knew insurance could be so interesting?

He does.  He, too.

warming my neck (after sticking it out)

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 11:59 am









winter hike

the baby’s breath

warms my neck

 

my tongue

explores a worn tooth

the snowy hills

 

 






dry heat

a hawk corkscrews

the sky

 

 


“winter hike” & “my tongue” from the haiku chapbook piano practice       piano stool

(Bottle Rocket Press, 2004)

“dry heat” from  from Walking the Same Path; Heron’s Nest VI:4

 

 

 


by dagosan:  



he’s stripping

the bed sheets

she shovels the walk

                                [Jan. 6, 2005]

 

 

 




 
Adirondack chair

upholstered

with snow

 

                 [Jan. 6, 2005, 

                         inspired by Ann Althouse]

 

one-breath pundit



  While others do his work, RiskProf Martin Grace is in Philadelphia interviewing
economists.  He did, however, leave behind a thought-provoking post on the

effects of taxing HMOs to subsidize med-mal preimums and another on

Credit (Insurance) Score, Race and Risk.  Who knew insurance could be so interesting?

He does.  He, too.

January 5, 2005

a Canadian role model

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 11:56 am

from the dEsq of ethicalEsq:

Clicking around on our Referer Page yesterday, it was quite satisfying to discover that a Google Search for lawyer contingency fees yielded the ethicalEsq archive on Fees as its #1 result. More exciting, however, was noting that the #2 result was a law firm that apparently told its clients they should negotiate with their lawyer over contingency fee levels. My euphoria was only diminished a little when I learned that the firm, Polten & Hodder, was located in Toronto– but it spiked back up again when I saw the content of the website.


podium sf When lawyers get together to discuss how to improve lawyer marketing, branding, images. etc. I hope they will learn some lessons from the attitude and substance of the materials found at the P&H website. When the visitor clicks on the English-language homepage, he or she is greeted by these passages from The Lawyer’s Calling, by Joseph G. Allegretti

(Paulist Press, New York, 1996):

“How much easier it is for a lawyer to conceive of his client not as an
adult, but more like a child, or a “case” to be tried or settled. How much
easier it is to take command, tell the client you’ll handle everything, and
then get on with your work without having to expend time and energy
nurturing a relationship between equals.”


“There can be no covenant between a lawyer and his client unless and
until the lawyer is willing to encounter his client as an equal who has
something of value to contribute to the relation. … The indispensable
first step in forging a covenant between a lawyer and a client is the
willingness of both parties to entrust themselves to the other.”


Beyond such generalities, you can find links to more materials which show that P&H takes the philosophy into its practice of law. It’s contingency fee FAQ page is a prime example — containing information and advice impossible to find on the pages of American tort/p-i lawyers, including:

  • “Such fees are usually based on a percentage–often 20% to 45% of

    the proceeds. Such agreements may also be dependent upon various

    factors including the nature and complexity of the matter, the risk involved,

    the cost in pursuing the matter, and the likelihood of success.”

  • “The key disadvantage is less obvious. Generally speaking, a

    contingency fee will in the long run cost you more than if you

    were paying monthly as the matter progressed.”

  • “Be wary of the “straight percentage.” You claim may settle early on. …

    You should try to arrange, therefore, what some lawyers call a “graduated”

    fee arrangement, whereby the percentage fee increases as the matter progresses.”

  • “Make sure your contingency fee agreement contains a provision that you are

    entitled to have the lawyer’s fee reviewed by a Superior Court judge to ensure

    that the agreement is fair and reasonable and is void of improper motive or conduct

    by the lawyer involved. You should insist on this provision. Try to get your lawyer

    to agree that he or she will make this application if you require it and that he or she

    will pay the cost of doing so–not you!”

  • “Negotiate with your lawyer. It may well be advisable to pay a separate, independent

    lawyer to negotiate the contingency agreement with the lawyer who is taking your case.

    Don’t laugh. If a small up front fee saves you $100,000.00 in fees down the road, it is

    money well spent.”

[You know, Brickman or Giacalone could have written this webpage copy!]



P&H also offers an extensive list of the Top 10 Ways to Save Money on Legal Fees. There are


good, practical pointers, with the preface: “We have observed over the years that the amount


of time lawyers have to spend on files can be a source of frustration not only for clients (who


have to pay for all that time) but also for lawyers, who would much rather spend their time applying


analytical skills than coping with the administrative details of a client’s file. EFFICIENCY is the name


of the game in keeping your legal bills down, way down.”



You’d almost think these guys were nurturing a fiduciary relationship with clients with regard to


fees. I’m inspired. What do you think ATLA? Public Citizen? Evan? Matt?




Speaking of inspiration from Canada, let’s share a few moments with poet-professor-


psycholgist George Swede from his treasury of haiku, Almost Unseen.





in the windswept window
among the wild trees
my face

one by one
to the floor all
of her shadows



as the professor speaks
only his bald spot
is illuminated



by dagosan:




neighborhood stroll


January 5th —


no one says “Happy New Year!”


[Jan. 5, 2005]



one-breath pundit



“tinyredcheck” I hate to be a curmudgeon, and Matt Homann does seem to deserve fiddle bow


all the nice things said about his personality and talent. But, from the


client/consumer’s perspective, I must continue to dissent from many


of the positions he takes on pricing legal services and branding law


firms. As I recently noted, he seems too often to be “dreaming up ways


for lawyers to extract more money from clients without giving them a better


product.” I continue to wonder how the fiduciary relationship jibes with


manipulating client psyches and price elasticities in order to maximize profits.


See our posts on value billing, lawyer marketing, and fees and the lawyer-fiduciary.



tiny check Evan Schaeffer has opened his weblog today to a post from a tort reformer.


Evan will respond. This should be a very useful forum on an important topic.

fee fie foe and fum

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 12:15 am

While thumbing through his dictionary tonight, ethicalEsq learned that fum means “to 

 play a fiddle.” He insisted on sharing that information (which Steve Minor probably

 already knew) and then asked to “guest post” here at his old weblog on the topics of

fees and lawyer-client relationships.  Naturally, we couldn’t refuse.                                                                                          

fiddle bow   From the dEsq of ethicalEsq:








Fa, Fe, Fi, Fo, Fum!
I smell the blood of an Englishman.
Be he live or be he dead,
I’ll grind his bones to make me bread

The verse from Jack and the Beanstalk seems more relevant than ever to America’s lawyers. 

When it comes to fees, our legal profession is fiddling away its scant goodwill, while its clients —

and youngest members — scream “fie” and are treated like foes.

 

An example is found in the latest cover story of Washington Lawyer, which is one more lament

over “The Tyranny of the Billable Hour.” (Jan. 2005)  The Billable Hour, rather than lawyer/law-firm

greed, is cast as the evil source of lawyer discontent and lousy lifestyles.  It’s as if the writer and

interviewees honestly believe law firms who shift to other billing methods will gladly allow each

lawyer to generate less income.  If you happen to see any hint of such an attitude (for instance,

here or there), please let us know.  Until there’s proof to the contrary, the track record of the profession

suggests that lawyers will either charge more while working less, or work just as much while collecting

at least as much in fees, which will merely be structured differently.  (e.g., our one-breath blurb here)

 

The one good aspect of the Washington Lawyer Billabe Hours article is the realistic approach —

taken by two lawyers who are outside the law firm rat race (MCI’s Anastasia Kelly and Justice Steven

Breyer) — that puts a lot of the onus on associates for accepting excessive billable hour.  The article

says:

 

           


Referring to lawyers who work for her at MCI, and who reported to her when she partnered

at Wilmer, Cutler & Pickering, Kelly says emphatically, “The quality of your life is your

responsibility! It is not my responsibility to give you a quality of life.  If you don’t have a

quality of life, it’s your responsibility to come to me and say, “I don’t have a quality of life,

and it’s because you’re making me work 80 hours a week.  So many people say it’s the

responsibility of a law firm or a company to make sure that their people have a quality of life.

It is a two-way street!

 

 “Moreover, says Kelly, any lawyer who feels an employer?s demands on his or her time are

too burdensome always has the option to walk out the door and go find a place that gives

you quality of life. That’s your responsibility: to go.  

 

“Justice Breyer, who sympathizes with the predicament of newcomers to the profession who

find themselves overworked, expressed a similar view in 2000:  More young lawyers may

have to speak up, tactfully of course, in an effort to help the firms create the workplace

environment that they will need. [They must] decide consciously what kind of career they

want and what they want the story of their lives to say.

If young lawyers want to work saner schedules but don’t want to sacrifice income or “prestige,” they need

to stop whining and realize that they are part of the problem (while, perhaps, hoping that maturity will bring

a change in priorities).    Is fumming related to fuming?  [read about lawyers and chronomentrophobia — the fear of time or clocks]






 


 










looking now
with greedy eyes
bare winter trees






greedily using up
the year’s first water…
the woman

 

Kobayashi Issa – translated by David G. Lanoue

January 4, 2005

saving snowmen (and ex parte animals)

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 12:19 pm

winter sunrise–
only pale green moss
on the cottonwoods


 






express line checkout-
the man ahead buys flowers
and breath mints

 

 

 


winter sunset
backlights the alders-
a small bird moves on


 

 


“winter sunrise–” tinywords (Dec. 3, 2001)

“express line checkout–” worldhaiku; haijinx I:1 (Vernal Equinox, 2001)

“winter sunset” – tinywords (Jan. 18, 2001)

 

 



 












all night 

a productive cough —

he hits the snooze button

                                        [Jan. 4, 2005]

 

one-breath pundit  



tiny check An ex parte animal: State Supreme Court Judge Joseph C. Teresi was reprimanded by the

NYS Commission on Judicial Conduct Monday for failing to disclose he spoke privately

to a defense witness (a nun) who then “abruptly” withdrew from testifying in a 2003 DWI

case.  (Teresi denied the affected party an adjournment to find another expert witness. 

As the Troy Record  (Jan. 4, 2005) tells us:


“In a February 2001 decision, the commission also censured Teresi for exerting

pressure on parties to settle a case, improperly excluding one lawyer from discussions

and showing bias against a litigate he wrongfully sentenced to contempt of court and

sent to jail for 45 days. The defendant was later released by another judge.”

How many bites should Judge Teresi get before the apple really bites back?

 

tiny check For reasons similar to those raised here, blog has made it to the List of Words Banished 
from the Queen’s English for Mis-Use, Over-Use and General Uselessness, promulgated by the Lake

Superior State University, in Sault Ste. Marie, MI.   They’ve been doing the list since 1977, and posters

from previous years can be printed out free. (via Inter Alia)

 

“snowManGray”  On the other hand, this snowman lover, cannot sit idol-ly by and condone LSSU’s

annual Snowman Burning to welcome the first day of spring.  Impermanence does not need help.

January 3, 2005

resolved: you shall read jim kacian’s haiku primer

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 11:55 pm

 


The tenth installment of Jim Kacian’s Haiku Primer

is now available, hereLast month Jim discussed haiku’s Related Forms; 

this month he explores the Performance of haiku.  This chapter is brief,

giving you a chance for review and for finally starting to write haiku.  











                  • To read all installments to date, click here.


                  • For a layman’s primer, try dagosan’s intro to haiku



 



                           the last words of the poem with the ink run dry








Jim Kacian  from Walking the Same Path,

the HSA 2004 Members’ Anthology 

 


one-breath pundit 



tiny check Is this sweeps month?  RiskProf starts the new year with a bland headline

masking two sexy [um, gendery] insurance tales.

 

tiny check  Flesh & Spirit Weak:  If you come here often, you know how often

your Editor has promised himself and his public to do more poetry

and less punditry, to maintain health and sanity.  Well, to no one’s

surprise, this year’s Resolution never made it past Jan. 1st.  Check

out Crime & Federalism to see the poison fruit of my labors:


swimming underwater sounds good to me

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 4:30 pm




 


snowy day
she paints the poppies
a deeper red


 




midday sun

the silence of swimming

under water



 

 


“snowy day” – the shiki haiku prize contest

“midday sun” –  from A Piece of Egg Shell (Magpie Haiku Press, 2004)

 

 


 












new year

same old

back                                       [Jan. 3, 2005]

 


one-breath pundit  







  • For some reason that escapes me, Evan Schaeffer — who is busy enough, it seems —   penny sm penny sm
    has taken it upon himself to dissect Judge Posner’s (purported) definition of “weblog” and

    suggest that he might try his hand at coming up with a better definition.  It makes for

    interesting lexicography (plus anthropology, with a hint of psychology).  We add our two cents+.

dagosan’s scrapbook — Jan. 2005

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 3:09 pm

crows neg flip


– below are haiku and senryu written by “dagosan“, this weblog’s Editor, David A. Giacalone. most have been on the Home Page, some are outtakes and rewrites. each is a work in progress. i hope they show improvement over time and encourage others to try writing haiku –


 – click here for dagosan’s archive












 

 

typing

’til the icicle lands —


pretty blue sky

                               [Jan. 31, 2005]






 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the hush of Sunday morning

under new snow —

tires spin and spin

                             [Jan. 30, 2005]

 

 

zero degrees —

windchimes play

for the scarecrow and me 

                                   [Jan. 29, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

sunshine finds

a prism —

forgotten paperweight



                                       [Jan. 28, 2005]









 

 


lunch-hour-five-degrees-too-many-errands


                                                               [Jan. 27, 2005]



 


that little grunt

dad always makes —

putting on my socks

 

 

 







headful

of suds

the shower turns cold

                                                                     [Jan. 25, 2005]

 

 



staring match out my window —

I blink first

the squirrel scampers

 

 

 

 

 

full-moon stroll

after the snowstorm —

she’s also lovely and cold

                                         [Jan. 24, 2005]

 

the Plow God builds

a mountain of snow —

can’t see the river today

 

 






licking the last smudge

of ice cream from the bowl —

snowplow scrapes the street 

                                             [Jan. 23, 2005]





 

 

 




the blizzard

starts as scheduled  —

saturday is cancelled

 

 

 






waiting out

the snowstorm —

full pantry

 

 

 

 

through the frosted window –

either dull gray

or bright white

 

 

[Jan. 22, 2005]

 

 

 



a pink mitten

at the curb —

rubbing one small red hand

 

                                           [Jan. 21, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


holding her breath

’til the engine starts —

visible relief


                          [Jan. 20, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


holiday leftovers —

searching the closet

for baggy clothes


                                 [Jan. 19, 2005]

 

 





 

 






zero degrees

looks just like thirty —

no strollers on the street

                                               [Jan. 18, 2005]

 

 

 

 





the detective

snaps her notebook shut —

blind witnesses

 

 

 

 

 




mlk, jr., day —

too cold

to march?

                                                    [Jan. 17, 2005]

 

 

 

 


 


the rookie cop rousts

an old hobo —

feeding plump pigeons

                                           [Jan.16, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


chain-reaction crash

on the sleet-slick bridge —

ice floes speed by

                              [Jan.15, 2004]

 

 

 

 







borrowed mystery —

a toilet-paper

bookmark

 

 

 

 

snowbanks and 

snowmen dissolve —

all-day rain

                            

 

 [Jan. 14, 2005]




 

 

 


wonton soup

wanton woman

no MSG

                                  [Jan. 13, 2005,

                                                  inspiration: B. Wooldrige]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


squinting at the repair bill —

fifty dollars

not five hundred

                          [Jan. 13, 2005]

 





 



 

 



toddler flounders

on the icy sidewalk —

computer crash

 

                     [Jan. 11, 2005]





 

 

 

 

cold fingers

warm

coffee mug

 

                     [Jan. 10, 2005]




 

 

 

 

 

sleep-in Sunday–


snowmelt

finds the newspaper

 

 

                               [Jan. 9, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 



frozen river —

snow hides

the elm’s reflection 

 

 

                       [Jan. 8, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 

 



overnight

enough snow to make

slush

 

                     [Jan. 7, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 


he’s stripping

the bed sheets

she shovels the walk

                                    [Jan. 6, 2005]

 

 

 




 
Adirondack chair

upholstered

with snow

 

                 [Jan. 6, 2005, 

                         inspired by Ann Althouse]

 

 

 



 

January 5th

neighborhood stroll

no one says “Happy New Year!”

                                                     [Jan. 5, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 

 
all night 

a productive cough —

he hits the snooze button

 

 

                                        [Jan. 4, 2005]

 

 
new year

same old

back                              

           [Jan. 3, 2005]

 

 

 

 

 

bus station hobo –

no ticket

no bed

 



 

 

January 1

laughing ’til it hurts –

the Marx Brothers visit

 

 

 



January 2

haven’t seen the sun

all year

 

                          [Jan. 2, 2005]

 

 

 


 

all the snow

melted —

New Year’s morning

 

                             [Jan. 1, 2005]

 

 


 

Issa and I —

new year’s eve

at home, alone

                       

                                       [Dec. 31, 2004]  

 

 



 






 


only crumbs

on the Christmas platter —

in bed, alone

                     [dec. 30, 2004]

 


 


 – – click here for dagosan’s archive


crows flip

January 2, 2005

blank vellum — with footnotes

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 6:31 pm

 

New Year’s dawn
light first gathers
in the icicles

first page
of the new journal
untrammeled snow

after snowfall
a Buddha on the lawn
with coal eyes

 

Jim Kacian from Presents of Mind (Red Moon Press, 1996). “snowManGrayF”











the hobo at Trailways –


nowhere to stay


or go








January 1


laughing ’til it hurts –


the Marx Brothers visit







January 2


haven’t seen the sun


all year



[Jan. 2, 2005]


 



one-breath pundit



butcherj Got Goat? We recently mentioned a local pet-or-meat? rabbit problem, but there’s a much bigger


Repast or Religion? conundrum stewing here in Schenectady, NY — our civic fathers and mothers,


along with the community, are debating whether to ban the backyard slaughter of goats (and,


due to equal protection worries, deer and all livestock) without a butcher license. This tale started


when an immigrant family apparently slaughtered a goat in its backyard (and cooked and ate it) this


summer, and a neighbor complained to our mayor, Bryan Stratton. Hizzoner was grossed out and


proposed the ban. Check out the ongoing conversation, with articles interspersed, at this Schenectady talkboard. You’ll find:

  • folks worried about traumatizing our children by subjecting them to the sights
    and sounds of killing animals;
  • others showing their barely veiled dislike for the many Indian-ethnic Guyanese,
    who have moved to Schenectady in recent years;
  • a curmudgeonly columnist mocking a WASPy-preppy mayor in this culture clash
    (see Reply 15, Carl Strock column, Daily Gazette, Sept. 26, 2004, “Shrink-rap culture
    on the march”); and Reply 42 – Carl Strock column “Big Danger in Sch’dy: Goats?”
  • an enterprising butcher, converting a truck into a curbside service (Reply 27, Daily
    Gazette, Oct. 26, 2004, “Butcher to offer mobile service”
  • Scroll down to Reply 38, for a copy of an Albany Times Union, article, “Stratton turns

    focus to quality-of-life issue” Nov. 30, 2004); and Reply 41 to see reactions from our City
    Council (Daily Gazette, Dec. 07, 2004, “Schenectady proposal targets butchering”).go to
    Goat Goes Mainstream,” for a Washington Post article on the national increase in demand
    for goats.


Thus — although this sad little rust-belt city has the lowest bond rates in the state; has recently


become the recipient of help from Curtis Sliwa and his Guardian Angels, to bring peace to our


neighborhoods; and has lost 33% of its population since 1950, with property values down


11.48% in just the past 5 years (see Newsday article) — you can come to our lovely City Hall for


the public hearing on Goat Slaughtering on January 10, 2005. See ya there!



tiny check There’s a very nice tribute to Susan Sontag and Jerry Orbach in Pete Hamill’s NYT op/ed


piece today. Hamill explains why “It was possible to cherish each of them in the same lifetime.” If you’d like an


Orbach memento, take a look at Brandon Bird’s the Law & Order Coloring Book, which we featured here.



“tinyredcheck” Our Sonorous Scold: Monica Bay has written a most uncommon New Year’s musing post — hitting all the right notes, and making me wish I coulda/hadda done it. I especially liked: “May we see the ordinary with new eyes. May we listen better,” and the next couple of clauses, which capture the quest for


the haiku moment.



tiny check Inadvertent Whiner? Unclear Winter? f/k/a turned up this morning as the #2 result in a [WeatherChannel]


Google search for Winer+Storm+Alert+Levels>. Who would have thought that Google would find almost


a thousand pages that contain all four of these words? Until I noticed the Weather Channel logo, I thought Dave Winer might be writing some code to improve Homeland /Userland Security. But, I figure someone


had lost a “t” (made an “ypo”) I sure hope the querist noticed the error sooner rather than later.


  • How did we make the list you ask? In 2003, we had a post wondering whether anyone
    other than Dave Winer and one or two others populated the blogosphere. Meanwhile,
    the SideBar contained this dagosan haiku:

    storm alert
    every kind of cloud
    in one sky


lawyer cellphone small Continuing to have more ego than common sense, I let myself be tempted into pinch-hitting over


at Mike Cernovich’s Crime & Federalism. (The poor wretch has been conned into believing he must


study for the bar exam.) Tonight, I’ve introduced my forthcoming series FedLabs 101. Make me and Mike


feel good and check it out, please.

January 1, 2005

into the flow of 2005

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 11:59 am

the entire f/k/a crew wishes you csikszenthmihalyian happiness “oldnewYearF”

in this new year.

 


turning into a child

on New Year’s Day…

I’d like that!

 

 






hey little snow

it’s New Year’s Day!

New Year’s Day!

 

 










my tumble-down house

just as it it…

“Happy New Year!”



Kobayashi Issa – translated by David G. Lanoue

– click here for a cornucopia of Issa New Year haiku          

 

 



 

 





new year’s rain

the circles in the puddle

widen

                 

 

 

new year’s fog

she washes

all the windows

                           

 


“new year’s fog” – Haiku Troubadours 2000

“new year’s rain” – Seasonal Winner, Millennium Haiku Calendar (2000)    


















all the snow

melted

New Year’s morning

 

                             [Jan. 1, 2005]

into the flow of 2005

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 11:59 am

old & new New Year The entire f/k/a crew wishes you csikszenthmihalyian happiness in this new year.
turning into a child
on New Year’s Day…
I’d like that!
hey little snow
it’s New Year’s Day!
New Year’s Day!
my tumble-down house
just as it it…
“Happy New Year!”





– click here for a cornucopia of Issa New Year haiku












new year’s rain


the circles in the puddle


widen





new year’s fog


she washes


all the windows





“new year’s fog” – Haiku Troubadours 2000


“new year’s rain” – Seasonal Winner, Millennium Haiku Calendar (2000)





















all the snow


melted


New Year’s morning



[Jan. 1, 2005]

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