{"id":4388,"date":"2006-02-18T22:59:29","date_gmt":"2006-02-19T02:59:29","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/formerlyknownas\/2006\/02\/18\/what-about-the-haiku\/"},"modified":"2011-08-05T14:54:09","modified_gmt":"2011-08-05T18:54:09","slug":"what-about-the-haiku","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2006\/02\/18\/what-about-the-haiku\/","title":{"rendered":"what about the haiku?"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a name='a6036'><\/a><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">You&#8217;ve waited too long for your Saturday haiku.<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">Good night from me and Rebecca Lilly:<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">Deep snow<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">on the white church dome&#8211;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">not even the sparrow stirs<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV>&#8220;snowflakeSN&#8221;&nbsp; &#8220;snowflakeSN&#8221;<\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">Frost-melt on windows&#8211;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">a bird&#8217;s delicate prints<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">on sun-glistened snow<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Arial\"><\/FONT><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>Funeral bells toll&#8230;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>pallbearers maneuver<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>the coffin over snow<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">Evening&#8230;moments<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">passersby turn to shadow<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">&#8211;the click of a latch<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/cyber.law.harvard.edu\/blogs\/static\/ethicalesq\/ShadwellLilly.jpg\" alt=\"LillyShadwell\" \/>&nbsp;<\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2004\/07\/12#a1801\"><FONT face=\"Arial\" color=\"#ff0000\" size=\"2\"><EM>Rebecca Lilly<\/EM><\/FONT><\/A><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"1\">from&nbsp;<\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/exec\/obidos\/ASIN\/0913559792\/qid=1105816725\/sr=11-1\/ref=sr_11_1\/104-1569557-1267912\"><EM><FONT face=\"Arial\" color=\"#000000\" size=\"1\">Shadwell Hills<\/FONT><\/EM><\/A><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"1\">&nbsp;(Birch Prees Press, 2002)<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"1\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><STRONG><EM>potluck<\/EM><\/STRONG><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\"><FONT size=\"2\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/cyber.law.harvard.edu\/blogs\/static\/ethicalesq\/tinycheck.gif\" alt=\"tiny check\" \/>&nbsp; <\/FONT><FONT size=\"2\">Somebody Googled <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.google.com\/search?hs=TQh&amp;hl=en&amp;lr=&amp;client=firefox-a&amp;rls=org.mozilla%3Aen-US%3Aofficial_s&amp;q=sue%20giacalone&amp;btnG=Search\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">sue giacalone<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&gt; this morning.&nbsp; Our post <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2004\/05\/20#a1517\" rel=\"nofollow\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#000000\" size=\"2\">Sue-Dough-Logic<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&nbsp;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">(disagreeing with <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.overlawyered.com\/archives\/001080.html\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#000000\" size=\"2\">Walter Olson<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&#8216;s negative thoughts on Client Protection Funds) <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">was the #1 result out of 84,000.&nbsp; Naturally, the <EM>f\/k\/a<\/EM> gang wonders whether the <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">query is a name or a threat.&nbsp;&nbsp; Where&#8217;s Walter when I need him? <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">This is a good&nbsp;opportunity to repeat that: We agree with <\/FONT><FONT size=\"2\"><A href=\"http:\/\/www.halt.org\/the_legal_reformer\/pdf\/tlr2000fall.pdf#HALT_Names_its_Dirty_Half-Dozen\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">HALT<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">&#8216;s<\/FONT><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">position that client protection funds need <\/FONT><\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">to be better funded in <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><EM>many<\/EM> states.<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&#8220;Blackboard abcN&#8221;&nbsp; <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.whataboutclients.com\/archives\/2005\/08\/about_dan_hull.html\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#000000\" size=\"2\">Dan Hull<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"> at <EM>What About Clients <\/EM>has a great pointer to a <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">Canadian Bar Association piece on <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.whataboutclients.com\/archives\/2006\/02\/plain_language.html\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">writing in Plain English<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">.&nbsp; &nbsp;Dan (who has <\/FONT><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">one of the most detailed &#8220;<\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.whataboutclients.com\/archives\/2005\/08\/about_dan_hull.html\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#000000\" size=\"2\">About<\/FONT><\/A><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">-me&#8221;<\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\"> pages in all weblogdom)&nbsp;says:<\/FONT><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\">&nbsp;&#8220;But <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.cba.org\/CBA\/PracticeLink\/CS\/plainlanguage3.aspx\"><FONT color=\"#000000\" size=\"2\">Part III on correspondence<\/FONT><\/A><FONT size=\"2\"> is detailed, generally applicable to <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\">any good writing, well-thought out and useful to anyone who shares <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\">this goal: put our embarrassingly medieval legal writing tradition out <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\">of its present misery (i.e., kill it), lovingly leave it to language and legal <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\">historians, and turn it into unprententious English which clients and <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT size=\"2\">other lawyers will actually want to read. Bravo. &#8220;<\/FONT><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<P><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/cyber.law.harvard.edu\/blogs\/static\/ethicalesq\/erasingS.gif\" alt=\"erasingS\" \/><\/FONT><\/P><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/cyber.law.harvard.edu\/blogs\/static\/ethicalesq\/checkedbox.gif\" alt=\"checked box\" \/> Don&#8217;t forget: You can get your daily dose of <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/stories\/storyReader$3281\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"black\" size=\"2\"><STRONG>dagosan<\/STRONG><\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&nbsp;at both <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/simplysenryu.blogspot.com\/\"><EM><STRONG><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#42aac8\" size=\"2\">simply senryu<\/FONT><\/STRONG><\/EM><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"> and <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/dagosanshaikudiary.blogspot.com\/\"><EM><STRONG><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#42aac8\" size=\"2\">dagosan&#8217;s haiku diary<\/FONT><\/STRONG><\/EM><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">.<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You&#8217;ve waited too long for your Saturday haiku. 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