{"id":3599,"date":"2005-02-08T11:03:24","date_gmt":"2005-02-08T15:03:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/formerlyknownas\/2005\/02\/08\/not-even-the-sparrow-stirs\/"},"modified":"2011-08-05T14:58:00","modified_gmt":"2011-08-05T18:58:00","slug":"not-even-the-sparrow-stirs","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2005\/02\/08\/not-even-the-sparrow-stirs\/","title":{"rendered":"not even the sparrow stirs"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a name='a3219'><\/a><\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">thick clouds lowering&#8230;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">brown eyes of horses blinking<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">through the whirling snow<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">Deep snow<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">on the white church dome&#8211;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">not even the sparrow stirs<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">Ice crystals in the pines&#8211;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">the dark half of the moon<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\">faintly visible<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\"><SPAN>&#8220;skatersignNF&#8221;&nbsp;<\/SPAN>&nbsp;<\/FONT><\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2004\/07\/12#a1801\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#ff0000\" size=\"2\"><EM>Rebecca Lilly<\/EM><\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">,&nbsp;from&nbsp;<\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/exec\/obidos\/ASIN\/0913559792\/qid=1105816725\/sr=11-1\/ref=sr_11_1\/104-1569557-1267912\"><EM><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">Shadwell Hills<\/FONT><\/EM><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&nbsp;(Birch Prees Press, 2002)<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Arial\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"1\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"1\"><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\" align=\"left\"><FONT><SPAN><FONT><EM><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\"><FONT size=\"2\"><\/FONT><\/FONT><\/EM><\/FONT><\/SPAN><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\" align=\"left\"><FONT><SPAN><FONT><EM><FONT size=\"+0\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">by <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/stories\/storyReader$3053\"><STRONG><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#000000\" size=\"2\">dagosan<\/FONT><\/STRONG><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">:<\/FONT><\/FONT><\/EM><\/FONT><\/SPAN><\/FONT><FONT><SPAN><FONT><FONT size=\"2\"><SPAN><FONT face=\"Arial\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\">sad chirp of&nbsp; <\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\">the smoke detector &#8212; <\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\">another low battery<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<FONT face=\"Times New Roman\">&nbsp;<\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"1\"><EM>[Feb.8, 2005]<\/EM><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><EM><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"1\"><\/FONT><\/EM>&nbsp;<\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><SPAN><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2004\/06\/27#a1700\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"#000000\"><EM><STRONG>one-breath&nbsp;pundit<\/STRONG><\/EM><\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\"> <\/FONT><\/SPAN><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><\/FONT><\/SPAN><\/FONT><\/FONT><\/SPAN><\/FONT><\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/cyber.law.harvard.edu\/blogs\/static\/ethicalesq\/tinycheck.gif\" alt=\"tiny check\" \/>&nbsp; A good result:<FONT color=\"#0000ff\"> <\/FONT><\/FONT><\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.sun-sentinel.com\/news\/local\/florida\/sfl-203counsel,0,354386.story?coll=sfla-news-florida\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" color=\"skyblue\" size=\"2\">Ocala boys arrested for violent drawings to get counseling<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><EM>. <\/EM>Per the<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><EM>South Florida Sun-Sentinel<\/EM>, Feb. 3, 2005:<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">Two boys accused of threatening a classmate by making violent drawings of stick figures will <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">avoid felony prosecution by joining a counseling program, officials said.<BR><BR>The boys, ages 9 and 10, are set to take part in a five- to seven-month intervention plan that <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">includes anti-aggression and anti-bullying counseling, said Robin Arnold, a Marion County <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">supervisor for the state attorney&#8217;s office.<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><\/FONT>&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">With the criminal charges dropped, the boys are free to return to school.<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<UL><br \/>\n<LI><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">The boys&#8217; parents will also participate in the counseling.<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<LI><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\"><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\"><EM>Sidenote<\/EM>:&nbsp; I wish commentators, would be a little <\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">more precise when they attack<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">the overzealous school administration.&nbsp; For example, John W. <A href=\"http:\/\/www.rutherford.org\/articles_db\/commentary.asp?record_id=321\">Whitehead<\/A><\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><A href=\"http:\/\/www.rutherford.org\/articles_db\/commentary.asp?record_id=321\">&nbsp;<\/A><\/FONT><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\"><A href=\"http:\/\/www.rutherford.org\/articles_db\/commentary.asp?record_id=321\">says<\/A> <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">the boys were arrested because they &#8220;drew stick figure drawings that were <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">considered by school authorities to be violent.&#8221;&nbsp; The arrests were because the<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">drawings were deemed to be specific threats, aimed at and shown to, a specific <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">classmate &#8212; putting the child in fear of death.<\/FONT><\/DIV><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<LI><br \/>\n<DIV><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\"><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">Other commentators seem to think it was important that the boys were &#8220;special<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">education&#8221; students.&nbsp; As is repeated in the article linked above, the malady of at<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">least one of the boys was Attention Deficit Disorder &#8212; hopefully, not a reason to<\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\">use a lesser standard when assessing the risk to others posed by the boys.<\/FONT><\/FONT><\/DIV><\/DIV><\/DIV><\/LI><\/UL><FONT face=\"Times New Roman\" size=\"2\"><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">&#8220;tinyredcheck&#8221; A <EM>very<\/EM> good result: &#8220;The Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas and Prime Minister Ariel Sharon <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">of Israel declared an effective cease-fire here today in the four-year low-intensity war known <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\" size=\"2\">as the intifada. Mr. Abbas said the two sides &#8220;have agreed to cease all acts of violence against <\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT size=\"2\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">all Palestinians and Israelis everywhere.&#8221;&nbsp; (<EM>NYT <\/EM><\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/www.nytimes.com\/2005\/02\/08\/international\/middleeast\/08cnd-summit.html?ex=1265605200&amp;en=ad6181e6e1f9c021&amp;ei=5090&amp;partner=rssuserland\"><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">article<\/FONT><\/A><FONT face=\"Times New Roman,Times,Serif\">, Feb. 8, 2005)<\/FONT><\/FONT><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\">&nbsp;<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\">&#8220;eschewSN&#8221;&nbsp; <EM>Eschew Jargon<\/EM>: <A href=\"http:\/\/commonscold.typepad.com\/commonscold\/2005\/02\/dog_pony_show_s.html\">Monica Bay&#8217;s advice<\/A> for tech vendors dealing with tech journalists is <\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\">good for almost every situation where technology is being hawked to lawyers &#8212;&nbsp;or to&nbsp;any other members<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\">of the non-techie public:<\/DIV><br \/>\n<BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><FONT color=\"#990033\"><FONT color=\"black\">&#8220;<STRONG>Don&#8217;t use jargon!<\/STRONG><\/FONT> <\/FONT><SPAN style=\"#000000\">If you want to communicate, use plain English. Save the acronyms <\/SPAN><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><SPAN style=\"#000000\">for one-upsmanship games with your competitors &#8212; journalists don&#8217;t want to have to<\/SPAN><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><SPAN style=\"#000000\">&nbsp;refer to their vendor-speak translation devices to understand your pitches. You have <\/SPAN><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><SPAN style=\"#000000\">a short amount of time to capture journalist&#8217;s fancy, don&#8217;t squander it. Key words to <\/SPAN><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><SPAN style=\"#000000\">avoid: solution, robust, mission-critical, -centric, strategic, deploy, enterprise, initiative, <\/SPAN><\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\"><SPAN style=\"#000000\">value-added, form factor.&#8221;<\/SPAN><\/DIV><\/BLOCKQUOTE><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\">See our own war of words <FONT color=\"black\">against jargon:&nbsp; <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2003\/10\/01#a307\"><FONT color=\"black\">here<\/FONT><\/A><FONT color=\"black\">, <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2004\/02\/11#a752\"><FONT color=\"black\">there<\/FONT><\/A><FONT color=\"black\">, <\/FONT><A href=\"http:\/\/blogs.law.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/2004\/02\/06#a737\"><FONT color=\"black\">everywhere<\/FONT><\/A><FONT color=\"black\">.<\/FONT>&nbsp; (find the <EM>eschew obfuscation<\/EM> bumper-<\/DIV><br \/>\n<DIV dir=\"ltr\" style=\"MARGIN-RIGHT: 0px\">sticker <A href=\"http:\/\/www.cafepress.com\/cp\/browse\/Ne-25_pv-MegaCreations.14558655_p-12_N-3641_bt-2?zoom=yes#zoom\"><FONT color=\"black\">here<\/FONT><\/A> at cafepress.com)<\/DIV><\/FONT><\/BLOCKQUOTE><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>thick clouds lowering&#8230; brown eyes of horses blinking through the whirling snow &nbsp; &nbsp; Deep snow on the white church dome&#8211; not even the sparrow stirs &nbsp; &nbsp; Ice crystals in the pines&#8211; the dark half of the moon faintly visible &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &#8220;skatersignNF&#8221;&nbsp;&nbsp;Rebecca Lilly,&nbsp;from&nbsp;Shadwell Hills&nbsp;(Birch Prees Press, 2002) &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; by dagosan:&nbsp;&nbsp; [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":94,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[2926],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-3599","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-pre-06-2006"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p6kP1R-W3","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3599","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/94"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3599"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3599\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":13381,"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3599\/revisions\/13381"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3599"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3599"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/archive.blogs.harvard.edu\/ethicalesq\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3599"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}