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February 3, 2008

a peek inside dust of summers: RMA 2007

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 5:23 pm

We previewed the 12th and newest edition of the annual Red Moon Anthology, dust of summers, three days ago. Since then, my copy of RMA 2007 arrived, allowing me to tell you a lot more about dust of summers and — more important — share many of the “best of 2007” poems written by members of the f/k/a family of Honored Guest Poets, whose work made it through the rigorous RMA selection process.

reversible jacket
the side
I always show

Colonel Mustard
in the library . . .
winter night

my hands at rest
in dishwater . . .
first hummingbird

………………………. by john stevenson in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
“reversible jacket” – orig. pub. Upstate Dim Sum 2007/1
“Colonel Mustard” – orig. pub. Modern Haiku 38:2
“my hands at rest” – orig. pub. The Heron’s Nest IX:3

dust of summers: The 2007 Red Moon Anthology of English-Language Haiku,” edited by Jim Kacian and the Red Moon Editorial Staff, Red Moon Press, Winchester, VA, USA, 172 pages, ISBN: 1-978-893959-68-2, $16.95; see cover)

Congratulations to the 152 haijin [meaning writers of haiku-related literature, not obsessive video gamers] whose works have been included in “dust of summers: RMA 2007.” Although we’ve often noted that no “best of” list can please everyone or avoid under- and over-inclusiveness, no publication does a better job than RMA in “assembl[ing] the finest haiku and related forms published around the world in English in a single book.” This year’s volume contains 154 haiku and senryu, 29 linked poems (haibun, renku and rengay), and 5 essays “on the reading, writing and study of the genre.”

gathering dusk
my son bowls me out
for the first time

a colleague’s sigh
arrives before he does
monday morning

february dawn
a tub of washing
all run blue

………… by matt morden in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
– all from Stumbles in Clover (Snapshot Press 2007)

Of the 127 poets whose haiku or senryu appear in RMA 2007, a mere seventeen achieved the coveted RMA hat-trick in 2007 — having three of their poems selected for inclusion in the anthology. In addition to hat-trickers Collin Barber, John Barlow, Ernest J. Berry, Ferris Gilli, Marcus Larsson, Daniel Liebert, Chad Lee Robinson, and Harriot West, nine members of our f/k/a family were so honored:

checkRed Roberta Beary, Yu Chang, Carolyn Hall, Jim Kacian, Peggy Willis Lyles, paul m., Matt Morden, Tom Painting, John Stevenson

In addition, out of that distinguished group, Carolyn Hall also had a rengay chosen for dust in summers (authored with our Billie Wilson); Roberta Beary had two of her haibun selected (short prose pieces with a linked haiku, one of which we posted on Jan. 30th); and Red Moon editor Jim Kacian also had a haibun and an essay chosen by the Editorial Staff for RMA 2007.

All told, 22 of the 27 living poets whose haiku and senryu appear at this weblog, are represented in “dust of summers.” In addition to those listed above, you’ll find the following f/k/a haijin in RMA 2007: Tom Clausen, DeVar Dahl, Alice Frampton, Barry George, David Giacalone, Lee Gurga, David Lanoue, paul m., ed markowski, w.f. owen, Andrew Riutta, George Swede, Hilary Tann, and Billie Wilson.

Because our Honored Guests generously allow f/k/a to re-publish their poems, I’ll be sharing items from RMA 2007 with you over the next week (which, like those in our preview, will be permanently available in our archives). Here, for your pleasure, edification, and evaluation are a dozen or so:

blind date
I ask the waitress
for a candle

autumn colors
we paddle closer
to the mountain
………………………. by yu chang in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
“blind date” – orig. pub. Modern Haiku 38:3
“autumn colors” – orig. pub. Frogpond XXX: 1

old friends talk
each holding
car keys

………….. by tom clausen in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
orig. pub. Frogpond XXX:1

autumn light —
the smell of tomato vines
on my fingers

…………………….. by devar dahl in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
orig. pub. 5th Shiki Poets’ Choice Awards

cloudy water
in the bud vase —
children grown and gone

………………………… by alice frampton in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
orig. pub. Frogpond XXX:1

winter sunrise__
the night waitress slowly
buttons her coat

…………………………. by barry george in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
– orig. pub Greieri si crizanteme

checkG

followed home
by a dog I don’t know
autumn dusk

splitting wood–
for a moment the log
holds the axe

…………………… by jim kacian in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
“followed home” – orig. pub. Robert Spiess Memorial Haiku Contest 2007
“splitting wood” – orig. pub. mayfly 42

Nearer the Mirage 

sun through dusty windows–
so many trinkets
with lost meaning

childhood. . .
my brother’s version

autumn rain
she leaves the weeds
on her father’s grave

the lines
all nodding in unison
last night’s dream

desert heat–
we move nearer the mirage

mayflies–
from the debts of the stream
a trail of bubbles

……………… a rengay by billie wilson and carolyn hall in “dust of summers: RMA 2007
– orig. pub. Frogpond XXXI: 1 [note: the title above is the correct, original title]

So far, I’ve only been able to focus on the poems written by f/k/a‘s Honored Guests, so I cannot give an overview on the “too many senryu” and “too many tell-ems” complaints that arose with RMA 2006. I can say that there were fewer tell-ems than I had feared among those written by our Honored Guests, but enough to give me a little case of agita.

January 30, 2008

RMA 2007 is here!

Filed under: Haiga or Haibun,haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 1:32 pm

dust of summers: The 2007 Red Moon Anthology of English-Language Haiku,” edited by Jim Kacian and the Red Moon Editorial Staff, Red Moon Press, Winchester, VA, USA, 172 pages, ISBN: 1-978-893959-68-2, $16.95; see cover)

day moon
we windowshop
caskets

…………………….. by Roberta Beary, USA, – dust of summers: RMA 2007; orig. pub. NOON 5

RMPLogo In the haikai community, the annual edition of the Red Moon Anthology is even more anticipated than Groundhog’s Day. Each volume in the much-honored RMA series attempts to collect “the best English-language haiku and related writings from around the world” published in the prior calendar year, as selected by the dozen distinguished members of its editorial board. Seeing which poems are included and savoring/judging them individually and collectively is an addiction for many poets and readers of the genre.

The new volume of RMA is not usually available before February, so when it’s out before Punxsutawney Phil shows his cute, furry head, it’s easy to predict an especially good and timely year for the oft-pokey haiku press. The twelfth volume in the RMA series is “dust of summers: RMA 2007.” My copy should arrive by the weekend, but I wanted to let f/k/a‘s readers know they can already get RMA 2007 from Red Moon Press. I also wanted to speculate a little before seeing this edition — wondering if some unaccustomed criticism in 2007 had any effect on this year’s version of 2007, and whether controversy will spur sales, as it does in so many other literary fields.

big sky: rma 2006 BigSkyRMA2006

As you may recall, I lamented last June that at least 25 of the 165 haiku and senryu chosen for “big sky” by RMA’s editors as “the finest haiku . . . published around the world in English in 2006” were tell-ems — poems in which the poet “tells” what is on his or her mind (by stating an insight or intellectual conclusion, or naming an emotional state) rather than “showing” us through images based on sensory experiences. My original “psyku” essay last year, and the follow-up anchovie piece at year-end, argue and assert that tell-ems — no matter how interesting the notion presented or how honored their authors — are second-rate representations of the haiku genre, which (as Prof. Yabut might say) deserve rewriting, not rewards. They rarely, if ever, belong in our best journals, much less in contests and anthologies proclaiming to present the very best haiku and senryu. So, I’m hoping that dust of summers will be kind to my haiku psyche, and not inspire an undue amount of agita and anchovy-parodies.

A far more prominent criticism of big sky: rma 2006 came from Robert Wilson, the managing Editor of Simply Haiku, in a book review published in his e-journal’s Summer 2007 edition. Robert’s basic complaint was that — for an anthology purporting to be “the best haiku” — there were simply too many senryu in RMA 2006, and they were not labeled as such to distinguish them from the haiku. Although he found a few excellent senryu, Wilson worried that many readers will be “confused about the difference between the two genres,” and he opines:

“There are some brilliant English language poets, but many are missing from Big Sky in favor of some of the above [senryu] inclusions. Perhaps the anthology’s editors didn’t look hard enough. I hope they dig deeper for next year’s anthology. And will be more up front next time and identify any senryu as such. “

I’m eager to see whether either criticism had any influence on this year’s selection by the RMA Editorial Board. As Red Moon noted when it unveiled big sky, “this most decorated series in haiku history [has been] winner of the Haiku Society of America Merit Book Award for Best Anthology virtually every year since its inception.” For whatever reasons (perhaps those noted above), RMA 2006 did not receive the Merit Book award this year. I hope and expect that dust in summers will be a major contender again for that coveted prize.

The Red Moon website tells us that dust of summers includes “150 poems, 25 linked pieces and half a dozen critical works which encapsulate the very best writing of the haiku world in English this year.” Despite my personal preferences and concerns, and my knowing how tenuous the “best of” notion can be, I can assure you that the majority of the poems selected for RMA 2007 will indeed — in Robert Wilson’s words from last year — be “wonderful and refreshing” and “deserve a wider audience.”

Since our Honored Guest poets are often among the most-frequently selected poets in RMA, I asked a couple of them yesterday to share their chosen poems for this preview. Here are a few, plus a haibun, to pique your interest. I’ll be presenting many more from the f/k/a haiku family once I have dust of summers in hand. [Update: for more poems by our Honored Guests from Dust of Summers, see our posts “more treats from Dust of Summers” (Feb. 7, 2008); and “a peek inside Dust of Summers: RMA 2007” (Feb. 3, 2008)]

retreating glacier–
how long since we’ve heard
the black wolf’s song

…………………………. by Billie Wilson USA – dust of summers: RMA 2007 (Red Moon Press, 2008); orig. pub. Modern Haiku 38:1

circle of lamplight–
I complete the baby quilt
begun for me

…………………………. by Carolyn Hall – dust of summers: RMA 2007; orig. pub. Heron’s Nest Award, HN IX:1

magnolias
opening
the moon roof

………………………….. by Peggy Willis Lyles — dust of summers: RMA 2007; orig. pub. Mayfly #43, Summer 2007

full morning moon —
the working girl’s
gauzy blouse

……………….. by David Giacalone — dust of summers: RMA 2007; originally published in Simply Haiku 5:3

In the Night Kitchen

the boyfriend’s in her room and i can hear sounds coming from up there i don’t know if they are giggles or groans or what i just want him to leave want to hear those boots coming heavy down the stairs and i know she has been away two years which means she has done all sorts of things she hasn’t told me the same way i never told mother only different because now i know what mother knew and what all mothers come to know in time

midnight
above a cluster of stars
one star

……………………… by Roberta Bearydust of summers: RMA 2007; orig. pub. Modern Haiku 38.1 (Spring 2007)

January 20, 2008

2007 winners from Mainichi

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 10:39 am

The winners of this year’s Mainichi Daily News haiku contest have just been announced — see the 11th Mainichi Haiku Contest (2007) results and commentary. Congratulations to Philippe Bréham (France), who took the First Prize. I’m pleased to see that two of the earliest members of our f/k/a family had honored poems:

chambers pulsing
in the washed-up jellyfish—
waning moon

Michael Welch (U. S. A.)
2nd Prize, 11th Mainichi Haiku Contest (2007)

. . . …………………………………… . . . .

snow flurries
a childhood friend
reappears

Peggy Lyles (U. S. A.)
Honorable Mention, 11th Mainichi Haiku Contest (2007)

Déjà-ku scholar Michael Dylan Welch was the second poet to agree to share his haiku at this weblog. Here are a few of his poems that fit my mood and themes this week:

first date
letting her
put snow down my neck

a table for one–
leaves rustle
in the inner courtyard

[photo/poem]

an old woolen sweater
taken yarn by yarn
from the snowbank

………………………. by Michael Welch
“first date” – South by Southwest 10:3; “edge of light: RMA 2003″
“a table for one” & “woolen sweater” – “Open Window” (photos and poems)

LylesRain Three years ago today, we posted our “inaugural” piece on Peggy Willis Lyles. As often, Peggy touches me with the honesty and empathy of her haiku:

bitter wind . . .
the hand that cups the flame
aglow

snowed in
the wedding-ring quilt
lumpy with children

winter night
he patiently untangles
her antique silver chain

wind and rain
the hand I reach for
in the dark

…………………. Peggy Lyles, from To Hear the Rain (Brooks Books, 2002)

In a day or two, we’ll be featuring some of the poems by “our” Carolyn Hall that can be found all this month on Cornell’s Mann Library Daily Haiku page. Please don’t wait for our posting to get over there and enjoy and appreciate a month’s worth of fine haiku by the much-honored Ms. Hall, chosen by Tom Clausen. For example:

a butterfly
so long at my window
summer dusk

fieplace glow
first signs of fraying
in the cane-back rocking chair

………………………………………. by Carolyn Hall

December 28, 2007

the HSA 2007 members’ anthology arrives

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 3:56 pm

Almost lost in the pile of Christmas packages that arrived at my door last week was a thick envelope that helps prove the old saw “better late then never.” It contained a copy of “flower of another country: the Haiku Society of America 2007 Members’ Anthology” (edited by Wanda D. Cook and Linda Porter, 2007). The stubby volume (4.25 by 5 inches), with a purple cover and a lime green bookmark ribbon, presents 186 poems, one per page, written by 186 members of HSA. (As the editors prominently remind readers, each member is assured that one of his or her submitted poems will appear in the anthology.) I want to thank Linda and Wanda for undertaking a time-consuming and often unheralded and under-appreciated job.

Although I am far too lazy and self-absorbed (and tired of reading haiku in massive numbers) to ever volunteer for the task of editing the Members’ Anthology, I am also far too opinionated to refrain from making a couple suggestions to future editors and contributors, based on my personal preferences: 1) these annual anthologies deserve to be preserved on our personal library shelves, and can more easily be honored and housed if they are published in a more conventional shape and size (such as last year’s award-winning version, fish in love, which was 8 inches tall and 84 pages); 2) to make the HSA Members’ Anthology more valuable and memorable, the chosen poems should, to the extent possible, be previously unpublished; therefore, members should submit and editors should choose poems that aren’t already widely known and available in the most-read haiku journals; and, naturally, 3) for the sake of quality and pedagogy, “show-ems” should always be vastly preferred over “tell-ems.”

The 2006 anthology has been sold out for quite awhile. You can still order the 2007 edition: The price per copy is $11.50 in the United States, $12.00 for Canada / Mexico and $15.00 elsewhere. To receive a copy, send your check to Paul Miller, HSA Treasurer, 31 Seal Island Road, Bristol, RI 02809-5186.

As expected, most of our f/k/a Honored Guests participated in this year’s HSA Members’ Anthology. Here, in alphabetical order, are the 19 poems submitted by the f/k/a family and selected by the editors of flower of another country:

morning mist
a bent back sweeps
yesterday’s blossoms

…………. roberta beary – Vancouver Cherry Blossom Festival 2006 (Highly Commended)

a dandelion or two
none of her new friends
best friends yet

……………… randy brooks

banana leaf
our small talk
in the rain

…………. yu chang – The Heron’s Nest 9:1 (2007)

in the garden
right by St. Francis
the woodchuck hole

…………….. tom clausen – Upstate Dim Sum 2006:2

eyeing
that mosquito —
frog and I

…………….. david giacalone (see original haiga here)

a butterfly
so long at my window
summer dusk

………. carolyn hall – The Heron’s Nest 9:1 (2007)

no old habits–
the newborn’s
cry

……………….. gary hotham – The Heron’s Nest 8:1 (2006)

the end before the end September rain

……. jim kacian – Kusamakura Haiku Contest 2006 (2nd place)

beer bottles on the table
a chess
problem

…………….. david g. lanoue

Sunday afternoon–
butterflies sweep the slow end
of the soccer field

………… peggy willis lyles – Mayfly #41, 2006

snow patches
the bones of bears
in this dirt

……… paul m.

dinner with an old lover
the tang of unripe olives

……… pamela miller ness – Acorn #17, 2006

Indian summer
his name comes to me
then is gone again

…………. w. f. owen

first crocus
I make a promise
I can’t keep

…………… tom painting – Shiki Monthly Kukai, April, 2007

winter night
i lie in bed
and imagine it

………….. john stevenson – Upstate Dim Sum 2007:1

from this ridge
not another in sight–
wind and wheat

…………… george swede

mountain stillness
the loon call
held by the lake

……………. hilary tann – The Heron’s Nest 8:4 (2006)

into the lake,
our skipping stones’
intermingling rings

……………………… michael dylan welch

from deep in the forest
a haunting birdsong
sung just once

…………………… billie wilson – The Heron’s Nest 8:4 (2006)

p.s. If you’re still in the holiday mood, you can find year-end and New Year poems by our Honored Guests by clicking here, or take a look at the f/k/a Christmas Season Haiku page, as well as our Holiday Haiku from Schenectady.

November 21, 2007

Stumbles in Clover by Matt Morden: more is more

Filed under: Book Reviews,haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 2:38 pm

Stumbles in Clover by Matt Morden (Snapshot Press 2007)

mid-argument–
a bumblebee
stumbles in clover

If you’re one of the many, mildly-manic fans of Matt Morden’s haiku and senryu, you surely have been wondering just when we’ll have a full volume of his one-breath poems to munch, mull over, or otherwise savor. Seeing Matt’s work in an occasional journal, or even at his personal weblog Morden Haiku, seems far too much like a tease, an appetizer setting the taste buds for the filling, main course stew.

If so, Stumbles in Clover (2007; order form), from UK haiku publisher Snapshot Press, is not merely a most-satisfying meal — it is a haiku lover’s Holiday Feast, combining an abundance of tastes and textures, traditional and modern, to please a multi-generational family of both fussy and hearty eaters. Moreover, unlike the proverbial cake, you can have it, and eat, and have it again.

washing away
TONIGHT’s SPECIAL
the thunderstorm

autumn rain
the ice cream van chimes
out of tune

shortest day
all of the yellow
beaten out of eggs

I’m still not used to reviewing haiku books, and am as reluctant as ever to try to summarize or encapsulate any book with a string of literary, artsy-sounding adjectives and motifs. So, I’m going to let Matt’s poems and a few of his friends do the talking, except for this simple summation:

By bringing 72 of his poems together as Exhibit One, Stumbles in Clover provides more than ample evidence that Matt Morden is one of the finest haiku and senryu poets writing today — that he brings depth and staying-power to his art. Matt writes the kind of poems I wish would come readily and often off the tips of my own tongue and fingers. I don’t need an Exhibit Two to rule on this matter, but I’d love to pore over the evidence at length, as soon as his next collection is submitted for our consideration.

end of the holiday
a square of pale grass
beneath the tent

Those who hang around the Comment section of the group weblog MagnaPoets Japanese Form, know how much I hate to agree in public with the MagnaPoets proprietrix, my friend poet-artist Aurora Antonovic, who is also the haiga editor of the Simply Haiku Journal. Nonetheless, I must admit, the quote you will find by “Agitaora” on the back cover of Stumbles in Clover is spot on:

“The resonant haiku in Stumbles in Clover bear the hallmark of a honed writer. Precise, keen, and image- and nature-rich, these multilayered poems explore ordinary occurrences in an unordinary way. Classic topics such as life, death, relationships, and change are treated with Morden’s fresh touch, ensuring each poem is relevant, open-ended, and highly authenic.”
……………………………………………. Aurora Antonovic

snowed in
ice takes
the shape of wire

Matt’s fellow Welshman, poet and journalist Nigel Jenkins, also adds his praise for Stumbles in Clover, with which I concur:

“These seventy-two haiku — with not a makeweight among them — are instinct with the ‘loneliness, tenderness and slenderness’ that Tony Conran has characterised as the essence of haiku. They are as spare and translucent as it’s possible to be, yet they are deeply affecting (especially the family-based poems) and, particularly when in senryu mode, wryly humourous.”
……………………………….. Nigel Jenkins

march wind
mother and baby
share a shawl

first day of term
her new school uniform
bright in the mist

summer’s end
my children try to teach me
how to smile

Likewise, poet-editor Ferris Gilli captures the spirit of this volume with a handful of words: “Matt Morden infuses his beautifully concise poems with appealing light, color, sound and texture, vividly presenting everyday events so that readers can discover unexpected drama in the substrata. Stumbles in Clover will keep fans coming back for more.”

higher and higher
on the trampoline
spring rain

I’ve got packing to do, before I head home for Thanksgiving. So, I’m going to end this little review of Stumbles in Clover. I hope someone treats you to a copy of Matt’s first collection during this holiday season (order; a steal at $14 American, so pamper yourself). Until you have one of your own, you’ll find many samples of his work by clicking the links on Matt’s f/k/a archive page and by heading over to Morden Haiku. No more stumble puns or clover cliches. Get this book, if you love really good haiku, and be thankful for more Morden haiku.

p.s. Thank you, Matt Morden, for this fine collection, and for leaving out the psyku and similar “tell-ems” that have been plaguing so many haiku publications in recent years.

Below the fold, you’ll find credits for the original publishers of the above poems.

(more…)

October 13, 2007

internment camp haikuist remembered

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 10:03 pm

 

 

Mayskyhaikug [Image: cover of May Sky:]

October sky —
the ginko crowd
complains about the rain

……………… by david giacalone (In mem. Violet Kazue de Cristoforo, d.o.d Oct. 5, 2007)

Violet de Cristoforo is best known for writing and collecting “kaiko” [modern, free-verse] haiku about life in the Japanese-American internment camps of World War II. Her life’s work culminated in the publication of the 287-page volume May Sky: There Is Always Tomorrow; An Anthology of Japanese American Concentration Camp Kaiko Haiku (Sun & Moon Classics, 1997). In 1987, she published a 35-page book of her own haiku, “Poetic reflections of the Tule Lake Internment Camp, 1944,”

Shortly before she died this month, at 90 years of age, Ms. de Cristoforo was honored as a 2007 National Endowment for the Arts, Heritage Fellow.

An L.A. Times article earlier this month, celebrating her life, contained three internment camp poems by Violet de Cristoforo:

Myriad insects
in the evening
my children are growing


Misty moon
as it was
on my wedding night

Foolishly — simply existing
summer days
Castle Rock is there

Violet de Cristoforo was featured this morning in a Remembrance on Weekend Edition Saturday, at National Public Radio (October 13, 2007). You can read much more about her in the L. A. Times book-section obituary, “Violet de Cristoforo, 90; California haiku poet survived WWII internment camps” and the IHT/Associated Press story, “Violet de Cristoforo, known for haikus on Japanese-American internment camps in US, dies” (October 5, 2007). Last year, the California Writer weblog had a lengthy post on her work.

October 9, 2007

The Unworn Necklace: roberta beary’s gems

Filed under: Book Reviews,haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 4:09 pm

The Unworn Necklace: Haiku and Senryu, by Roberta Beary
(Snapshot Press 2007)

When I first mentioned lawyer Roberta Beary at f/k/a, in August 2004, I confessed that her haiku made me “feel like a poseur” for using the pseudonym haikuEsq. Since that time, I’ve grown more and more certain that only Roberta Beary deserves the sobriquet “haikuEsq” — not only because of the quality and quantity of her haiku and senryu, and all the recognition heaped upon her by the haijin community [see our post “yes, her again“], but because she continues (unlike myself and f/k/a Honored Guest Barry George, J.D.) to actively practice law, as a member of the Washington, D.C. Bar.

custody hearing
seeing his arms cross
i uncross mine

custody weekend sunglassesG
inside her backpack
cinderella

……………………………
“custody hearing” – The Unworn Necklace; & pocket change
“custody weekend” – Simply Haiku (Summer 2007, vol 5 no 2)

Of course, most lovers of fine haiku don’t know or care that Roberta has a law degree and is a real estate finance attorney. For them, she’s not “the best lawyer haiku poet,” she’s quite simply one of the best damn haiku poets alive — and she has proven it in haiku journals, contests and anthologies, year in and year out, for over a decade. However, to the chagrin of Roberta Beary fans worldwide, there has never been an entire volume of her haiku in existence, to grace our lives and book shelves.

the empty place
inside me
. . . wild lupine

— not until now, that is. For throngs of haiku/senryu aficionados, therefore, the publication by Great Britain’s Snapshot Press, in August 2007, of The Unworn Necklace, by Roberta Beary, is a long-awaited, much-anticipated haikai milestone.

In case you can’t tell, TUN‘s arrival in late September on this side of the Atlantic, so that I could actually hold it in my warm little hands, was a special treat for me. And, although I . . .:

  • am well known for holding my friends to especially high standards and doling out praise to them in a miserly fashion
  • have never, to put it mildly, been a lawyer-phile who feels a bond with others simply because they are lawyers
  • rarely feel any ancestral tug toward Italy and Sicily (not even around Columbus Day)
  • never feel the need to write book reviews, especially ones that wax poetic about volumes of poetry; and
  • do not at all understand why people are “proud” of achievements by other individuals in which they have played no part (e.g., local sports teams, fellow countrymen, relatives)

. . . beary . . . I, nonetheless, feel an enormous need to say how thrilled I am that Roberta Beary — friend, and fellow-lawyer, Baby Boomer, Bethesdan, born skeptic, and 50-percent decendent of Sicilians — has finally given us the 69-poem volume entitled The Unworn Necklace. Those who know me well, know that I do not consider myself a poetry lover. Indeed, my attraction to haiku — and especially the haiku of Roberta Beary — is the very fact that it is the most “unpoetic” of poetic genre, without frills or fancy verbiage, finery or hyper-prosody.

I especially like the focus of haiku and senryu on the concrete, the small things that are part of everyday life. Roberta excels at that focus, while courageously revealing moments (as well as cycles and seasons) of pain, and understanding that darkness and hurt are not only natural parts of life, but can be as life-affirming as the joys and beauty she also finds and shares.

So, I know Roberta will excuse me for not “waxing poetic,” with flowery words or theoretical flourishes, about the book as a collection of poems. I shall let more scholarly experts do that — to wit, from the Back Cover of The Unworn Necklace:

‘Moving full circle from the opening to closing poems,
this substantial collection of Roberta Beary’s haiku
offers a feast for the inner eye and heart.
Beary’s haiku record life passages—love and loss,
anger and forgiveness, family and solitude—linking
human nature and the natural world with exquisite
sensitivity and striking clarity. A stunning collection!’

……………………… Penny Harter

necklaceG ‘Remarkably depicted and balanced, The Unworn
Necklace unravels and extends like a poignant novel.
A prescription for healing, its poems seem as if they
were chiseled, exhibiting just the right words. Many
of these haiku will become classics, yet this is the book
to tell others about right now.’

………………………. Lenard D. Moore, Haiku Editor, Simply Haiku, and upcoming president of the Haiku Society of America

If you are a frequent visitor to this weblog, you may have in fact [talk about added value] already seen most of the poems that are presented in The Unworn Necklace. (Click on the posts listed on f/k/a‘s Roberta Beary Archives Page to find scores of her poems.) Indeed, the first poem we posted the first time we specifically featured Roberta was this one, from A New Resonance 2 (Red Moon Press 2001):

all day long
I feel its weight
the unworn necklace

Last January, when her manuscript won the Snapshot Press grand prize and was therefore slated for publication later this year, we posted five poems from Roberta’s upcoming book. One favorite was this one, originally published in Frogpond, which won 1st Place in the Haiku Society of America’s 2006 Gerald Brady Senryu Contest:

first date—
the little pile
of anchovies

Since receiving a copy of the actual book two weeks ago, I’ve shared a pair of poems from TUN, here, and another there. To be honest, there are so many great poems — which Lenard correctly says “will become classics” — that I cannot readily (especially under the influence today of a flu virus that is spreading across Upstate New York) choose representative examples from TUN. Instead, I shall literally open the book, at random, to three even-numbered pages, and type each of the poems right here for you, the f/k/a reader.

snow melt
the logs
he left behind

mother’s day
a nurse unties
the restraints

early spring walk
your hand
in my pocket

………………… by Roberta Beary – from The Unworn Necklace (Snapshots Press, 2007)

If the above doesn’t make you want to click the link to the Snapshot Press Order Form, or to the page that just went up today at Amazon.com, I guess you must be suffering from flu-brain-fog, too. All there remains for me to say, in closing, is: Thank you, Roberta, for creating this collection. Please don’t wait so long to give us a second volume. And, please don’t feel that you have to “suffer for your art” this next decade. Don’t visit the Dark Side just for your fans’ sake. But, do take us wherever life brings you.

update: See our posting “PSA honors haiku — Roberta Beary’s The Unworn Necklace” (April 22, 2008)

September 9, 2007

john stevenson to don the editor’s hat at The Heron’s Nest

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 5:53 pm

thnLogoG When I first introduced John Stevenson to the then mostly-lawyer readership of f/k/a in March 2005, I began “Trust me, nobody has better haiku credentials than John Stevenson.” Well, John’s about to gild his haijin resume with yet another indication of the esteem he has garnered in the haikai community: Christopher Herold, founding editor of The Heron’s Nest, announced today that he is about to give up his role as Managing Editor of that much-admired haiku journal, and is passing the mantle to John Stevenson. [Kudos and many thanks to Christopher for creating and maintaining one of the most valued treasures of English language haiku.] Here’s some of what Christopher had to say about John and his prior relationship as a poet with The Heron’s Nest:

“I am delighted to tell you that, beginning with the first issue of Volume X 2008, John Stevenson will be the Managing Editor of The Heron’s Nest. As most of you know, John is currently the Editor of the Haiku Society of America’s journal, Frogpond (Associate Editor, 2002-2004; Editor, 2005-2007). . . .

“Beyond his considerable contributions to the Haiku Society of America, John Stevenson has been one of the most consistently applauded poets in The Heron’s Nest as well as its most prolifically published poet. Two of John’s poems appeared in the inaugural issue of The Heron’s Nest (September 1999) and since then he has only been absent from its pages on four occasions. To date, 88 of his poems have been published in The Nest. Of those, three have won Heron’s Nest Awards [as best in the issue], five have been runners-up to the award, and three more received numerous votes in the end-of-the-year Readers’ Choice Awards and were subsequently chosen for Special Mention. A magnificent accomplishment and all the more reason to welcome John Stevenson as the most natural successor to my position of Managing Editor (the unanimous wish, by the way, of the entire Heron’s Nest team).”

Back in February, we noted with pride that John was chosen as the Most Popular Poet in THN’s Readers’ Choice Awards for 2006. The f/k/a Gang agrees that John was indeed “the most natural” choice to head The Heron’s Nest and continue its role as a foremost haiku publication, “where tradition and innovation meet … and complement each other.”

Here are the first two haiku published by John Stevenson in The Heron’s NestVol. 1, #1 (1999):

my son noticing . . .
the attention i pay
to butterflies

falling leaves— thnLogoG
several trees
in the woodpile

If there is one downside for The Heron’s Nest and its fans, it is that John, as Managing Editor, may not be presenting his own poems at THN. Other haiku publications will surely be looking forward to receiving more of his poetry. You can see some of John’s best and freshest work in Upstate Dim Sum, the biannual anthology of the Route 9 Haiku Group.

update (Feb. 4, 2008) : See “latest edition of Frogpond is Stevenson’s last.”

Some of the Silence (Red Moon Press, 1999) was John Stevenson’s first full collection of haiku. I continue to recommend it highly. You can find much more of John’s work right here at f/k/a, through links on his archive page. We have featured his poems in over 80 posts in the past 30 months.

Also try John’s fine 2004 collection, Quiet Enough (Red Moon Press)

p.s. I hope John won’t mind too much this spotlight on his newest accomplishment — not to mention the dorky graphic that I stuck at the intro to this posting. I’m sure he’ll take it out on me the next time we get to play bocce in Schenectady’s Central Park. With the help of his stellar crew of Associate Editors at The Heron’s Nest, he’ll surely have time this winter for another round of snow bocce.

snow bocce
left the pooper scooper
at home

………………. by dagosan



August 15, 2007

new edition of Simply Haiku

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 9:26 am

No Controvery & No More Waiting: There may be agita and anticipation in Schenectady today over Sex Offender legislation, but there is nothing but joy in the Haiku Community, because the newest edition of Simply Haiku, (Autumn 2007, vol. 5 #3), went online overnight. As usual, in this combination haiku journal and magazine, you will find excellent examples of Japanese short-form poetry (such has haiku, senryu, haibun, renku, and both modern and traditional haiga), along with essays and commentary.

This month, they even presented five poems by dagosan‘s alter ego, including this pair:

first the scent –
lilac bushes
’round the corner

blustery day
one tulip
keeps his head

…………………………………….. by David Giacalone, Simply Haiku, Autumn 2007, vol 5 no 3

You will also find, for example, haibun (prose with a linked poem) by our never-disappointing Roberta Beary, plus the experimental “alphabet jazz‘ by Ed Markowski; haiga (an image with a linked poem) by f/k/a‘s honorary daughter Aurora Antonovic; and five tanka by Tom Clausen, including this pair:

overly familiar
to me now,
this way of seeing people
as being like someone
I’ve known before

I sit on a stool
nursing the furnace
looking into where
our warmth has come
and gone…

…………………………………… by Tom Clausen – Simply Haiku (Autumn 2007)

August 10, 2007

f/k/a’s 2007 ito en oi ocha winners

Filed under: haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 4:20 pm

Oi Ocha is “The most popular green tea beverage in Japan,” and its parent company Ito En, Ltd. has been sponsoring the “ITO EN Oi Ocha New Haiku Contest” every year since 1989. Ito En says:

  • This contest has contributed to the rejuvenation of haiku, a Japanese traditional short poem only seventeen characters in length. Endorsed by the Japanese Ministry of Education, Culture and Science,
  • this contest features haiku promoting free expression . . . What makes this contest unique is the acceptance of both “New Style” haiku and traditional haiku. To encourage as much participation as possible, any themes can be chosen, and “New Style” haiku do not have to include kigo (words symbolizing one or more of the four seasons). Moreover, “New Style” haiku, whether in Japanese or English, do not need to follow the 5-7-5-syllable format—the most common taught outside of Japan.
  • Last year, the seventeenth contest drew over 1,650,000 entries and different haiku (the most entries ever).
  • The award-winning haiku are not only compiled and printed in an annual ITO EN publication entitled Jiyu Gatari (Free Expression) but also printed and appear on Oi Ocha brand products.

At least four of f/k/a‘s Honored Guest Poets had winning haiku in Ito En 17th Contest last year — Andrew Riutta, Roberta Beary, Ed Markowski and Jim Kacian. The winners in this year’s 2007 ITO EN Oi Ocha New Haiku Contest — #18 — have been announced. Congratulations to Roberta, Ed and Jim, who have repeated their success. [If other f/k/a family members have also won, I hope they will let haikuEsq know.] You can find their winning poems, with Japanese translations here. Because few of our readers outside of Japan will get to see the winning haiku in the 2007 Free Expression anthology or on Oi Ocha tea products, we’re presenting the poems by our Honored Guests for your entertainment and edification — and to urge you to submit poems for the 19th Contest. [Need more incentive? Ed and Jim each won Y30,000 in prize money last year for their Judge’s Award poems; Roberta’s Sponsor’s Award comes this year with Y20,000 in prize money.]

rolling thunder
the deeper darkness
of distance

…………………………………. by Jim Kacian

just enough moon
for this firefly to land
on my finger

…………………………………………………. by roberta beary

hunting stories
the old cat yawns
& walks away

……………………………… by Ed Markowski

Here are Jim and Ed’s Judge’s Award winners from last year’s 17th Ito En Oi Ocha New Haiku Contest:

Lightning—
the fly resettles
in the same spot

…………………………….. by jim kacian

factory entrance
moths spin round & round
a bare light bulb

………………………………….. by ed markowski

August 2, 2007

more honors for Hall, Miller, Kacian and Beary

Filed under: Book Reviews,haijin-haikai news,Haiku or Senryu — David Giacalone @ 7:47 am

HSALogo The Haiku Society of America honors “excellence in published haiku, translation and criticism” every year, through its Mildred Kanterman Memorial Merit Book Award. The 2007 HSA Merit Book winners were just announced, and the 2007 Award Report posted by this year’s judges, our f/k/a Honored Guest friend Ed Markowski and well-known haijin Yvonne Cabalona. The f/k/a Gang is proud to report that members of our family of guest poets has again been remarkably successful, with awards for haiku publishing excellence going to Carolyn Hall, Paul Miller (a/k/a “paul m”), Jim Kacian, and Roberta Beary.

Congratulations to Jeanne Emrich and the Reeds haiga organization. At $16, their First Place winning anthology Reeds: Contemporary Haiga 2006 must surely also be the Best Haikai Value for 2006. The contest judges say: “Beautifully arranged, this collection of haiga from 35 contributing poets and painters delivers inspiration, surprise and delight from cover to cover.”

Here is the official list of all the 2007 HSA Merit Book winners:

First Place: Reeds: Contemporary Haiga 2006, edited by Jeanne Emrich
Lone Egret Press. 6566 France Avenue South. Suite 1210. Edina, Minnesota USA 55435. $16.00

Second Place: Water Lines by Carolyn Hall
Snapshot Press. P.O. Box 132, Waterloo, Liverpool England L22 8WZ US $14.00 UK 7.99 (pounds) Canada $17.00

Third Place: called home by paul m. CalledHomePaulM
Red Moon Press P.O. Box 2461 Winchester, Virginia 22604-1661 USA $12.00

Fourth Place: paperweight for nothing by vincent tripi
Tribe Press 42 Franklin Street. Grenfield, Massachusetts 01301 USA $20.00

Special Category Honorable Mention For Haibun: Business in Eden by David Cobb
Equinox Press. Sinodun Shalford Braintree Essex CM7 5 HN Great Britain. 7.95 (pounds)

fish in love

Special Category Honorable Mention for Anthology: fish in love, edited by Roberta Beary and Ellen Compton. The Haiku Society of America Members Anthology 2006. Available from and published by The Haiku Society of America. [ed. note: fish in love is apparently sold out; let’s hope this honor results in a 2nd printing.]

Special Category Honorable Mention for Best International Collaboration: Presents of Mind by Jim Kacian. Translation into Japanese by The Kon Nichi Haiku Circle, Kumamoto University. Red Moon Press. P.O. Box 2461 Winchster, Virginia 22604-1661 USA $20.00 US 22.00 yen Japan

(see cover) In awarding Carolyn Hall‘s Water Lines Second Place, the Kanterman judges said “From first poem to last, one is taken on a smooth journey marked by ordinary scenery that becomes extraordinary by virtue of the poet’s keen and guiding eye.” We previewed Water Lines when it was still a manuscript and was a winner in the 2005 Snapshots Press haiku collection contest. The book was reviewed at Modern Haiku (Summer 2007), by Paul Miller. Here is a sample of Carolyn’s fine haiku from Water Lines:

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